Writers Wordshop Thursday: Haiku

Tree on Morning Walk

Strip’ed of your coat
Reveals the abandoned homes
Left for warmer climes

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/08879476262337290531 TSannie

    I love haiku and yours is lovely!

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/10399156539354549499 Jen

    that just says it all.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/16056327117924455147 Mama Dawg

    That was beautiful.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/03593468374316318014 Kimberly

    Oh, it is so on. I’m so totally writing my own Haiku. This week. Maybe. Ok, it’s on the list.Snap!

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/14020147028703666774 Amy McMean a.k.a McSunshine

    nice job. I’m not creative in a haiku kinda way.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/10053598560687202583 Sometimes Sophia

    Very poetic. The imagery was great.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/04773481719981401980 Sam

    it really is quite amazing how much can be said and portrayed within a few lines!!

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/08533846030170827115 Carrie

    Great haiku! I had to keep reworking mine to fit the syllables

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/02535272474888203197 Jay @halftime lessons

    Great blog, and stunning header!< HREF="http://www.halftimelessons.com" REL="nofollow">Jay @ HalftimeLessons.com<>PS…do you know that your word verification is on? You can easily turn it off…I wrote about how to do it < HREF="http://halftimelessons.blogspot.com/2008/11/here-is-how-its-done3.html" REL="nofollow">here…<>

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/16047430228350114744 Sue

    Well done! I just love a good haiku, don’t you?

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/04359245078617786198 Laura Ingalls Gunn

    I beautiful haiku. I never could write one very well. :)

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/06744123704292534249 J'Ollie Primitives

    Applause.Beautiful haiku. Love the imagery.

  • http://www.blogger.com/profile/11556451375792958743 Mama Kat

    Atta girl! Very nicely done. :)